Please take few moments and read over my cover letter. It literally includes everything I know/did while working. I've been looking for a job for nearly 3 months and I'm absolutely frustrated. I apply every single day 30 to 40 positions nationwide, and no positive responds.
Can you please assist me into making better if possible.
New York NY, USA
May 8th, 2013
I am writing this letter regarding the Project Coordinator position, offered at ABC consulting group in Buffalo, NY. I’m really interested into joining your team and be a part of an exciting and energetic organization. I believe my proven skills and comprehensive background in management and IT administration will make me a highly competitive candidate and a valuable asset to ABC consulting group.
My recent position was a Project Manager for at XYZ International in Kuwait. Being in a diverse community, the work environment was very competitive and challenging. I lead and managed large scaled IT and civil projects for both US Military and Kuwaiti Government. Some key area where my experience elevated:
• Initiating projects and planning strategies through project life cycle.
• Leading teams to complete tasks and reach objectives.
• Developing RFQ, RFP and bidding process skills.
• Change management.
• Communication planning.
• Inspection and quality control.
• Using technology resources to track progress.
My information technology experience relate to positions held for LMN Queens NY, and EFG NY, NY. I was responsible of handling day-to-day IT operations, server management, LAN administration and customer service.
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1255 Ottawa Avenue
Ottawa, Ontario L1L 1L1H: (519) 234-5555
July 3, 201X
Marjorie Majors, Owner
Ottawa Dental Associates
9898 Yonge Street
Ottawa, Ontario L2L 2L2
Dear Ms. Majors:
Are you interested in hiring a loyal, task and detail-oriented professional, renowned among patients as trustworthy and dependable, generating patient loyalty for the practice? If so, then may we meet to further discuss the value-add I will bring to the position of Office Coordinator and Patient Administrator? I have attached my resume for your review.
I excel in workflow management, am an active contributor and team player, and am ignited by a challenge. Supporting the business and alleviating Senior Management of the daily operational responsibilities, allowing the dental professionals to focus solely on their areas of expertise, are my fortes!
Though content in my current position at Community Dental Care, I am seeking a new opportunity where I can make a larger contribution to the bottom-line. My initiative and creativity have generated significant savings to my employer including:
⇒ Achieved a $6,000 payroll reduction by accessing a government wage subsidy program.
⇒ Recouped 100% of a Worker’s Compensation Claim totalling $1700.
I am anxious to provide your firm with similar results, as I understand the criteria to run a profitable practice management operation! In short, I know I have the necessary combination of skills and experience to succeed in the position of Office Coordinator and Patient Administrator with Ottawa Dental Associates and provide measurable results.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I await your call.